The Survival Story.

                        Introduction: Hi, I'm Blackmoon, let me show you my story...
Chapter one:
           I opened my eyes for the first time in the NightmareClan nursery. I yawned and then padded out and looked around. I raced over to the freshkill pile, and sniffed it. I picked out a mouse for my mother, Demonicstar, and padded over to her. "Demonicstar" I squeaked, "Heres a mouse" She said "Thank you" And looked at it and the smile dropped from her mouth. "Hawkclaw!" She yowled to the DemonicClan med cat. He raced over and looked at it. "The fur on it... Look! Theres a moon!" He exclaimed. "Who brought you this?" Before my mother answered, I mewed "Me" And he looked at me. "You...you need to go to the moonstone!"

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Chapter two: 


           As Hawkclaw got me ready with traveling herbs, I looked around. News sure got around fast. The apprentices were looking at me with awe, so were the kits. The warriors gave me don't-die-out-there looks. The elders payed no attention to me. As he meowed "Your ready." I got really nervous as I set out. NightmareClan territory was covered in bones and volcanos. As I crossed WindClan territory, I realized I should keep low. As I hurried in ThunderClan territory to hide, I saw that Sun-Down was near, and I burst out. I ran as fast as I could and reached there just in time, and ran in. My instincts told me to run away, but I pressed my nose to the stone, just like Hawkclaw said. As I did that, I saw starry warriors and something hit me in the back of the head. StarClan! The ones my mother used to say were real but we didn't worship them, only the Dark Forest.  The cats seemed as one as they meowed: Believe in us, Blackkit, for soon you will come to this cat... And they parted to reveal a jet black she-cat. She said to another cat "Hi, my name is Redstrike, and what are you doing in StormClan territory?"
As I faded into reality, The StarClan cats meowed: Blackkit, believe your heart, not just us..... 

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Chapter three: 

      As I woke up beside the Moonstone, my whiskers twitched and I looked at my flanks. "W-w-w-what!?" I yowled aloud. I wasn't pure black! I had an iceblue moon on my flank... both of them! I padded through the cave again, shivering now that I realized it was so dark. As I burst out of Highstones, and ran back. I can't be late! They'll be worried sick! I thought.  As I ran, I heard something, and slowed down. "What's that..?" I whispered. I saw some cats on WindClan territory, and ThunderClan's! As I ran for my life, I burst out  on NightmareClan's territory. As I put my nose to the ground, I caught a strong whiff of cats. Border patrol I thought. And padded more slowly into the camp, guarded by two volcanos. As I padded in, Demonicstar rushed over. "What happened to your flanks?!" She yowled. "I-I-I don't know." I meowed back in reply. I knew I was too young to be an apprentice... But I asked her. "Demonicstar..." I began to meow. "Can I be an apprentice now?" "Oh,  I don't see why not...." And she jumped onto the Highlava. And let out a yowl. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join here beneath the Highlava for a Clan meeting!"
                                                                   
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Chapter four:
"Blackkit, step forward." Demonicstar's meow stood out against the usual territory sounds, and my ceremony was held at Moonhigh.
"Blackkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Blackpaw. Your mentor will be me myself, I hope I will pass down all I know to you."
My mother touched her nose to mine, and the whole Clan yowled "BLACKPAW BLACKPAW!" But, above all, my mentor snarled, "And to celebrate, we will attack ThunderClan!" The whole Clan cheered, but deep in my heart, I didnt want it to happen... And I didnt know that that moment would change my life...
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Chapter four: 
  As I snuck into the ThunderClan territory, I snorted quietly to Demonicstar, "How can they live here?" She replied, "We may never know." As I walked in quietly, I saw a kit was awake, and that she squeaked when she saw me. "Hi!" She whispered. "I'm Rosekit!" Her pelt was a striking red velvet, and we played for awhile, until... Demonicstar rushed in, and with a swipe of her claw she killed Rosekit, and I was so enraged I jumped onto her back and sunk my fangs into her back, she yowled, and I heard her meow, "Get out of my Clan... NOW"


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5 comments:

  1. good story.
    no offence, but cood u perhaps change the name. it actually kinda copied mine & orangefurs, no offence.
    my honest opinion.
    slow things down a little bit. use the cats senses. describe things a bit more, how it was dark on the way into the moonstone, etc.
    those little things make stories better. :)
    also, was that part about redstar something that happens in the future?if so, woodnt it b Redstar, since i brought u to the clan, & she was redstar, since u wernt ther from the beginning? meep X3

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    1. No... its what is happening while I was in the Moonstone......... T^T




      ~Blackmoon~

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    2. And then as I grew older, she did too...

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  2. Wow your Clan mom was vicious!

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